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Tuesday 21 April 2020

tooth fell out when l was sleeping

My tooth fell out
When l was sleeping I woke up and my tooth
fell out. It felt so weird. Tonight the tooth
fairy is coming.I'm excited because l get
money from the tooth fairy, she gives me 10
dollars. l showed my mum, dad, sister, and nan
my tooth. My tooth is tiny. We put my tooth
in a bag so it doesn't get lost so the tooth
fairy can find it and carry it back to fairyland. 
       

3 comments:

  1. That is so exciting Kaelyn. I wonder how much money you will get from the tooth fairy? I like your punctuation today like your commas and full stops, I can see you have tried hard. Next time to make your writing better you could organise your ideas into paragraphs. Keep up the awesome home learning.

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  2. i got ten and five money

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  3. You are so lucky! What do you think you will spend your money on?

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