My tooth fell out
When l was sleeping I woke up and my tooth
fell out. It felt so weird. Tonight the tooth
fairy is coming.I'm excited because l get
money from the tooth fairy, she gives me 10
dollars. l showed my mum, dad, sister, and nan
my tooth. My tooth is tiny. We put my tooth
in a bag so it doesn't get lost so the tooth
fairy can find it and carry it back to fairyland.
That is so exciting Kaelyn. I wonder how much money you will get from the tooth fairy? I like your punctuation today like your commas and full stops, I can see you have tried hard. Next time to make your writing better you could organise your ideas into paragraphs. Keep up the awesome home learning.
ReplyDeletei got ten and five money
ReplyDeleteYou are so lucky! What do you think you will spend your money on?
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